📄 *SUB Thu 11.13.25 - The Elevator

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Background Question: based on these descriptions, are you more of an "Introvert" or an "Extrovert?"How can you tell?  Be specific and incorporate examples from your personal experiences.  Are you "ok" with what you are (introvert vs extrovert), or do you wish you could change?Why?Explain.

  • I'm an introvert because I don't really like to talk a lot. 

Instructions:  carefully read the short story "The Elevator" by William Sleator.  While reading, pay close attention to whether the protagonist (main character) could be considered in introvert or an extrovert.

Analysis Question:  based on this story, is the protagonist (main character) more of an introvert or an extrovert?How can you tell?  Include specific details and examples from the text to support your response.

  • I think that Martin is an introvert because he is bullied at school which can mean that he doesn't like to be in big groups because he is a little small and shy kid. He is also really scared because of an elevator which shows how more of an introvert he is because extroverts wouldn't be scared of an elevator and would just walk right in but introverts would have to think before they go in. 

"The Elevator" is an unusual short story because it ends just before the climax (the moment of greatest suspense when the character makes a big decision or takes an action that determines the outcome of the rest of the story).  This means the author has chosen to leave it up to you to decide how the story ends…

Instructions:  carefully review the partial plot diagram for "The Elevator" provided below.  Then, write an ending for the story that includes the rest of the Climax, the Falling Action, and the Resolution.

Your ending should mimic the author's style(diction/word choice, tone, mood, etc.) and be at least half a page in length.  Make sure your ending addresses the following plot components (see Guiding Questions).

Plot Component

Guiding Questions

Climax

What will Martin say or do after the woman presses the "Stop" button in the elevator?  What big decision(s) or difficult choice(s) will he make?  What specific action(s) will he take, and why?

Falling Action

What happens as a result of the decision(s) that Martin makes or the action(s) he takes during the Climax?  How will his internal conflicts (fear of the elevator) and external conflicts (with his father and the woman) be resolved?

Resolution

Will Martin end up better off or worse off than he was at the beginning of the story?  What theme or lesson will the ending of your story teach, and why/how?

BONUS: try communicating one of the following themes/lessons…

  • "It's always okay to stay true to yourself, even when others pressure you to change."

  • "Sometimes you have to step out of your comfort zone to get the most out of life."

  • "You should never judge a book by its cover/people will often surprise you."

  •  Other (Your Choice) "_______"

story ending (1/2 page minimum)

Martin finally had enough of his dad forcing him to go into the elevator. He finally pressed the button, went inside, and pressed floor 17. The elevator door then shut, the elevator started moving. Martin was really scared. The elevator then stopped. The door opened, and another person came into the elevator. He was a short and friendly grandpa. He waved hi to me and I politely smiled back. He pressed floor 16 which was directly under my floor. Once the elevator started moving again the old grandpa started the act weird. He was moving everything in his body very wildly until he finally formed into a huge old man. He had teeth as big as a t-rex and a body as big as a gorilla. He started heavily pounding on the elevator.  The elevator began shaking very violently about to collapse.  Snap! The elevator snapped in half and the gorilla was able to catch a hold of a nearby floor. However, Martin  was stuck hanging on for his life on the nearby walls. The gorilla saw Martin and decided to finish him. He lunged towards Martin, snatched him by his arm and dragged him to the 16 floor. The gorilla started nonstop beating Martin and Martin couldn't hold it anymore. He found a metal rod nearby got a hold of it and smashed the gorilla right across his face with it. The gorilla was beat badly and was knocked unconscious. Martin found some water and started drinking but right after 1one sip he fainted. When he woke up he found himself In his room the next morning. He realized that it was just a dream. His alarm clocking waking him up getting ready for school. He went to school and came back with a bunch of stains on his clothes from people bullying him. He decided to face his fears again and decided go just go the elevator. He pressed floor 17 and the elevator started going up. It stopped at floor 15 when an old man came in. Martin got super scared and was shook with horror. He tried to stay calm until floor 17. When he arrived at floor 17 he saw that the old man was gone. When he looked Infront of him he saw a giant gorilla.

WHEN FINISHED:  get caught up on any late/missing/partially completed assignments for 2nd Quarter (see Synergy/Teams/OneNote).Reminder: the"Introduction Poem"(10.30.25)-OR- the "Inference Poem"(11.03.25) and the "Narrative Poem"(11.06.25) pages are due this Friday, November 14th.

🇨🇳 翻译内容 (Chinese)

背景问题:根据这些描述,你更倾向于“内向”还是“外向”?你是如何判断的?请具体说明并结合你的个人经历举例。你对自己的性格(内向还是外向)感到“满意”吗?或者你希望自己能改变吗?为什么?请解释。

  • •我是一个内向的人,因为我不太喜欢多说话。

说明:请仔细阅读威廉·斯莱特(William Sleator)的短篇小说《电梯》(The Elevator)。阅读时,请密切关注主人公(主要角色)是内向还是外向。

分析问题:根据这个故事,主人公(主要角色)更倾向于内向还是外向?你是如何判断的?请包含文本中的具体细节和例子来支持你的回答。

  • •我认为马丁(Martin)是一个内向的人,因为他在学校被欺负,这可能意味着他不喜欢待在大人群中,因为他是一个有点矮小害羞的孩子。他还非常害怕电梯,这表明他更内向,因为外向的人不会害怕电梯,会直接走进去,而内向的人在进去之前会犹豫思考。

《电梯》(The Elevator)是一篇不同寻常的短篇小说,因为它在高潮(角色做出重大决定或采取行动,从而决定故事其余部分结局的最高悬念时刻)之前就结束了。这意味着作者选择将故事的结局留给你来决定……

说明:请仔细审阅下面提供的《电梯》(The Elevator)的部分情节图。然后,为故事写一个结局,包括剩余的高潮、下降动作和结局。

你的结局应模仿作者的风格(措辞/选词、语调、情绪等),并且至少半页长。请确保你的结局涵盖以下情节组成部分(参见指导问题)。

情节组成部分

指导问题

高潮

在女人按下电梯里的“停止”按钮后,马丁(Martin)会说什么或做什么?他会做出哪些重大决定或艰难选择?他会采取哪些具体行动,为什么?

下降动作

马丁(Martin)在高潮期间做出的决定或采取的行动会带来什么结果?他的内心冲突(对电梯的恐惧)和外部冲突(与父亲和那个女人)将如何解决?

结局

马丁(Martin)的结局会比故事开头更好还是更糟?你的故事结局将传达什么主题或教训,为什么/如何传达?

额外加分:尝试传达以下主题/教训之一……

  • •“即使别人给你压力让你改变,忠于自己也永远是对的。”

  • •“有时你必须走出舒适区,才能充分体验生活。”

  • •“你永远不应该以貌取人/人们常常会让你感到惊讶。”

  • • 其他(你的选择)“_______”

故事结局(至少半页)

马丁(Martin)终于受够了他爸爸强迫他进电梯。他最终按下了按钮,走了进去,然后按下了17楼。电梯门随即关闭,电梯开始运行。马丁非常害怕。电梯随后停了下来。门开了,另一个人走进了电梯。他是一个矮小友善的老爷爷。他向我挥手打招呼,我礼貌地回以微笑。他按下了16楼,就在我楼下。电梯再次启动后,老爷爷开始表现得很奇怪。他全身疯狂地扭动,直到最终变成了一个巨大的老人。他有像霸王龙一样大的牙齿,身体像大猩猩一样大。他开始猛烈地捶打电梯。电梯开始剧烈摇晃,即将坍塌。“咔嚓!”电梯断成两截,大猩猩抓住了一个附近的楼层。然而,马丁紧紧抓住附近的墙壁,性命攸关。大猩猩看到了马丁,决定了结他。它扑向马丁,抓住他的手臂,把他拖到16楼。大猩猩开始不停地殴打马丁,马丁再也撑不住了。他找到一根附近的金属杆,抓住它,猛地砸向大猩猩的脸。大猩猩被打得很惨,昏了过去。马丁找到一些水开始喝,但只喝了一口就晕倒了。当他醒来时,发现自己第二天早上在自己的房间里。他意识到那只是一场梦。他的闹钟响了,叫他起床准备上学。他去上学,回来时衣服上沾满了被欺负的污渍。他决定再次面对自己的恐惧,决定去坐电梯。他按下了17楼,电梯开始上升。它在15楼停了下来,一个老人走了进来。马丁非常害怕,吓得发抖。他努力保持冷静,直到17楼。当他到达17楼时,他看到那个老人不见了。当他看向前方时,他看到了一只巨大的大猩猩。

完成后:请补交第二季度所有迟交/缺失/部分完成的作业(请查看 Synergy/Teams/OneNote)。提醒:“介绍诗”(10.30.25)——或——“推论诗”(11.03.25)和“叙事诗”(11.06.25)页面将于本周五,11月14日截止。

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Description: This image is an infographic comparing the characteristics of introverts and extroverts. It features two head silhouettes at the top, one for each personality type, with thought bubbles and lightbulbs. Below, a series of colored horizontal bars list contrasting traits for introverts on the left and extroverts on the right, separated by "VS" symbols.

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INTROVERTS EXTROVERTS Prefer spending time in solitude VS Have large social networks Avoid being the center of attention VS Enjoy being the center of attention Think before they speak VS Tend to think out loud Value close 1:1 relationships VS Loves being in large groups Need time alone to recharge and reflect VS Gain energy from being around other people Prefer working in quiet, independent environments VS Thrive in team-oriented and open work settings Deeply focus and think about specific interests VS Make quick decisions Can be seen as reserved VS Outgoing, enthusiastic and positive

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内向者 外向者 喜欢独处 VS 拥有庞大的社交圈 避免成为关注的焦点 VS 享受成为关注的焦点 三思而后言 VS 倾向于边说边想 重视一对一的亲密关系 VS 喜欢身处大型群体中 需要独处时间来充电和反思 VS 从与他人相处中获得能量 喜欢在安静、独立的环境中工作 VS 在团队合作和开放的工作环境中表现出色 深入思考并专注于特定兴趣 VS 快速做决定 可能被视为内敛 VS 外向、热情、积极

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Description: The image displays a text-only document, likely a short story or an excerpt from a narrative. Titled "The Elevator" by William Sleator, the text describes a young boy named Martin's increasing anxiety and fear related to using an old, small, and often malfunctioning elevator in his apartment building, culminating in a strange encounter with a woman.

🇨🇳 描述: 图像显示了一份纯文本文件,很可能是一篇短篇小说或叙事文摘。该文标题为威廉·斯莱特(William Sleator)的《电梯》,描述了一个名叫马丁的小男孩在使用他公寓楼里一部老旧、狭小且经常出故障的电梯时日益增长的焦虑和恐惧,最终以他与一名女子的奇怪相遇告终。

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The Elevator by William Sleator It was an old building with an old elevator – a very small elevator, which could carry only three people. Martin, a thin twelve-year-old, felt nervous in it from the first day he and his father moved into the apartment. Of course he was always uncomfortable in elevators, afraid that they would fall, but this one was especially unpleasant. Perhaps this was because of the poor lighting and the dirty walls. Perhaps it was because of the door, which never stayed open long enough, and slammed shut with a loud clanging noise. Perhaps it was the way the elevator shuddered each time it left a floor, as if it was exhausted. Maybe it was simply too small. It seemed crowded even with only two people in it. The stairs were no better. Martin tried them one day after school. There were no windows, and the lights were not working. Martin’s footsteps echoed behind him on the cement, as though there was another person climbing, getting closer. By the time he reached his home on the seventeenth floor, he was gasping for breath. Martin’s father worked at home. He wanted to know why Martin was out of breath. “Why didn’t you take the elevator?” he asked, frowning at Martin. You’re not only skinny and weak and bad at sports, his face seemed to say, but you are also a coward. After that, Martin always took the elevator. He would have to get used to it, he told himself, just like he got used to being bullied at school. But he didn’t get used to it. He was always afraid that it would stop suddenly and he would be trapped inside it for hours by himself. But it wasn’t much better when there were other passengers. He didn’t like to be close to them. He also disliked the way people tried hard not to look at one another, staring at nothing. One morning the elevator stopped at the fourteenth floor, and a fat lady got on. She was wearing an old green coat that ballooned around her. As she waddled into the elevator, Martin was sure he felt it sink under her weight. She was so big that her coat brushed against him, and he had to squeeze himself into a corner. There was no room for anybody else. The door closed quickly behind her, and instead of facing it, she turned around and stared at Martin. He looked at her for a moment. She had large fleshy cheeks and no chin, just a huge mass of neck. Her blue eyes were tiny but sharp. They seemed to be boring into Martin’s face. Martin looked away, but the woman didn’t turn around. Was she still looking at him? He glanced at her quickly, then looked away again. She was still watching him. He wanted to close his eyes, he wanted to turn around and stare into the corner, but how could he? The elevator creaked down to twelve, then eleven. The piggy eyes were still looking at him. She had to be crazy. Why else would she stare at him like this? What was she going to do next? She did nothing. She only watched him, breathing loudly, until the elevator reached the first floor at last. Martin wanted to run past her to get out, but there was no room. He could only wait as she turned and moved slowly out into the lobby. Then he ran. He didn’t care what she thought. He ran nearly all the way to school. He thought about her all day. Did she live in the building? He had never seen her before, and the building was not very big. Maybe she was visiting somebody? But 7.30 in the morning was too early for visiting. Martin felt nervous when he got back to the building after school. But why should he be afraid of an old lady? He felt ashamed of himself. He pressed the button and stepped into the elevator, hoping that it would not stop, but it stopped on the third floor. Martin watched the door slide open, revealing a green coat, a piggish face and blue eyes which were already staring at him as if she knew he would be there.

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电梯 威廉·斯莱特 著 那是一栋老旧的建筑,配着一部老旧的电梯——一部非常小的电梯,只能载三个人。马丁,一个瘦小的十二岁男孩,从他和父亲搬进公寓的第一天起,就对它感到紧张。当然,他坐电梯总是感到不舒服,害怕它们会坠落,但这部电梯尤其令人不快。也许是因为光线昏暗,墙壁肮脏。也许是因为电梯门,它从不长时间开着,总是砰地一声巨响关上。也许是因为电梯每次离开一层楼都颤抖一下,仿佛精疲力尽。也许它就是太小了。即使只有两个人,也显得拥挤不堪。 楼梯也好不到哪里去。有一天放学后,马丁试着走了楼梯。没有窗户,灯也不亮。马丁的脚步声在水泥地上在他身后回响,仿佛有另一个人在爬楼,而且越来越近。等他爬到十七楼的家时,已经气喘吁吁了。 马丁的父亲在家工作。他想知道马丁为什么气喘吁吁。“你为什么不坐电梯?”他皱着眉问马丁。他的脸上似乎在说,你不仅又瘦又弱,体育也不好,还是个懦夫。从那以后,马丁总是坐电梯。他告诉自己,他必须习惯它,就像他习惯了在学校被欺负一样。 但他并没有习惯。他总是害怕电梯会突然停下来,他会独自被困在里面好几个小时。但有其他乘客时也好不到哪里去。他不喜欢和他们靠得太近。他也不喜欢人们努力避免眼神接触,茫然地盯着虚空的样子。 一天早上,电梯停在十四楼,一个胖女人走了进来。她穿着一件旧的绿色大衣,在她身上鼓鼓囊囊的。当她摇摇摆摆地走进电梯时,马丁确信他感觉到电梯在她的体重下沉了一下。她太大了,大衣擦到了他,他不得不把自己挤进一个角落。已经没有地方容纳其他人了。电梯门在她身后迅速关上,她没有面向电梯门,而是转过身来盯着马丁。 他看了她一会儿。她脸颊肥大,没有下巴,只有一大块脖子。她的蓝眼睛很小但很锐利。它们仿佛要钻进马丁的脸里。 马丁移开了视线,但那个女人没有转过身去。她还在看着他吗?他迅速瞥了她一眼,然后又移开了视线。她还在盯着他。他想闭上眼睛,他想转过身去盯着角落,但他怎么能呢?电梯吱呀作响地降到十二楼,然后是十一楼。那双猪一样的眼睛还在看着他。她一定是疯了。不然她为什么这样盯着他?她接下来会做什么? 她什么也没做。她只是看着他,大声喘着气,直到电梯终于到达一楼。马丁想跑过她身边出去,但没有空间。他只能等着她转过身,慢慢地摇摇摆摆地走出大厅。然后他跑了。他不在乎她怎么想。他几乎一路跑到学校。 他一整天都在想她。她住在这栋楼里吗?他以前从未见过她,而且这栋楼也不是很大。也许她是来拜访某人的?但早上七点半来访也太早了。 放学后回到大楼时,马丁感到紧张。但他为什么要害怕一个老太太呢?他为自己感到羞耻。他按下按钮,走进电梯,希望它不要停,但它停在了三楼。马丁看着电梯门滑开,露出一件绿色大衣,一张猪一样的脸和一双蓝眼睛,它们已经盯着他,仿佛她知道他会在那里。

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Description: The image displays a large block of text, formatted as a narrative story. It appears to be an excerpt from a book or educational reading material, detailing a sequence of events involving a character named Martin, an elevator, and another character referred to as "the fat lady." The text describes Martin's experiences and feelings related to these encounters.

🇨🇳 描述: 图片显示一大段文字,排版成一个叙事故事。这似乎是书本或教育阅读材料的节选,详细描述了一系列事件,涉及一个名叫马丁的角色、一部电梯,以及另一个被称为“胖女士”的角色。文字描述了马丁与这些遭遇相关的经历和感受。

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It wasn't possible. It was like a nightmare. But there she was. "Going up!" said Martin, his voice little more than a squeak. She nodded, and stepped on. The door slammed. He watched her pudgy hand move towards the buttons. She pressed, not fourteen, but eighteen, the top floor. The elevator trembled and began to go up. The fat lady watched him. This morning she got on at the fourteenth floor, so why did she get on at the third floor today and go up to eighteen? The elevator seemed to be moving more slowly than usual. Martin wanted to press seven, so that he could get out and walk up the stairs, but he couldn't reach the buttons without touching her, and he didn't want to do that. When the elevator stopped on his floor, she hardly moved out of his way. He had to squeeze past her, rubbing against her horrible scratchy coat. He was afraid the door would close before he could get out. She turned and watched him as the door slammed shut. "Now she knows I live on seventeen," he thought. "Have you ever noticed a strange lady in the elevator?" he asked his father that evening. "Can't say I have," he replied, not looking away from the television. Martin knew he was probably making a mistake, but he had to tell somebody about the woman, "She was in the elevator with me twice today. She just kept staring at me. She never stopped looking at me for a minute." "What are you so worried about now?" his father said, turning impatiently away from the television. "What am I going to do with you, Martin? Honestly, now you're afraid of some poor old lady." "I'm not afraid." "You're afraid," said his father. When are you going to grow up and act like a man? Are you going to be timid all your life?" Martin didn't want to cry in front of his father, so he waited until he got to his room. His father probably knew he was crying anyway. He slept very little. In the morning, when the elevator door opened, the fat lady was waiting for him. Martin stood there, unable to move, then backed away. As she saw him, her expression changed. She smiled as the door slammed. Martin started running down the stairs. The stairs were dark and he fell. His father was silent on the way to hospital, disappointed and angry with him for being a coward and a fool. Martin had broken his leg and needed to walk on crutches. He could not use the stairs now. Was that why the fat lady had smiled? Did she know what would happen? At least his father was with him in the elevator on the way back from the hospital. There was no room for the fat lady to get in, and if she did, his father would see her and maybe he would understand. When he got home, he could stay in the apartment for a few days. The doctor said that he had to rest as much as possible. Martin felt quite safe from the fat lady now. "Oh, I almost forgot," his father reached out and pressed number nine. "What are you doing?" asked Martin, trying not to sound afraid. "I promised to visit Mrs. Ullman," said his father, looking at his watch as he stepped out of the elevator. "Let me go with you. I want to visit her too!" Martin pleaded, struggling to move on his crutches. But the door was already closing. "Afraid to be in the elevator alone?" said his father. "Grow up, Martin." The door slammed shut. Martin hobbled to the buttons and pressed nine, but it didn't do any good. The elevator stopped at ten, where the fat lady was waiting for him. She moved in quickly, and he was too slow to get past her in time to get out. The door closed and the elevator began to move. "Hello, Martin," she said, and laughed, and pushed the Stop button.

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这不可能。这简直像一场噩梦。但她就在那里。“上楼!”马丁说,声音小得像吱呀一声。她点点头,走了进去。电梯门砰地关上了。他看着她胖乎乎的手伸向按钮。她按的不是十四楼,而是十八楼,顶层。电梯颤抖着开始上升。那个胖女人盯着他看。 今天早上她是在十四楼上的电梯,那为什么今天她会在三楼上来,然后去十八楼呢?电梯似乎比平时慢。马丁想按七楼,这样他就可以出去走楼梯了,但他不碰到她就够不着按钮,他可不想那样做。 当电梯停在他那一层时,她几乎没有给他让路。他不得不挤过去,蹭到了她那件粗糙得可怕的外套。他生怕门在他出去之前关上。门砰地关上时,她转过身看着他。“现在她知道我住在十七楼了,”他想。 “你有没有注意到电梯里有个奇怪的女人?”那天晚上他问父亲。 “没注意过,”父亲回答,眼睛没离开电视。 马丁知道他可能犯了个错误,但他必须把那个女人告诉某人,“她今天和我一起坐了两次电梯。她一直盯着我看。她一分钟都没停止看我。” “你现在又在担心什么?”父亲不耐烦地把头从电视上转开,说,“我拿你怎么办,马丁?说真的,你现在竟然害怕一个可怜的老太太。” “我没害怕。” “你就是害怕,”父亲说,“你什么时候才能长大,像个男人?你难道要一辈子都这么胆小吗?” 马丁不想在父亲面前哭,所以他等到回房间才哭。他的父亲可能知道他哭了。他几乎没怎么睡。 早上,当电梯门打开时,那个胖女人正在等他。马丁站在那里,动弹不得,然后退了回去。她看到他时,表情变了。门砰地关上时,她笑了。 马丁开始跑下楼梯。楼梯很黑,他摔倒了。去医院的路上,父亲一言不发,对他这个懦夫和傻瓜感到失望和愤怒。马丁摔断了腿,需要拄拐杖走路。他现在不能走楼梯了。难道这就是那个胖女人笑的原因吗?她知道会发生什么吗? 至少从医院回来的路上,父亲和他一起在电梯里。电梯里没有那个胖女人的空间,如果她进来了,父亲会看到她,也许他就会明白了。回到家,他可以在公寓里待几天。医生说他必须尽可能多休息。马丁现在觉得那个胖女人对他来说相当安全了。 “哦,我差点忘了,”父亲伸出手按了九楼。 “你干什么?”马丁问,努力不让自己的声音听起来害怕。 “我答应去拜访厄尔曼太太,”父亲说着,看了一眼手表,走出了电梯。 “让我跟你一起去。我也想去拜访她!”马丁恳求道,挣扎着拄着拐杖移动。 但门已经开始关了。“害怕一个人坐电梯?”父亲说,“长大点吧,马丁。”门砰地关上了。 马丁一瘸一拐地走到按钮前按了九楼,但没用。电梯停在了十楼,那个胖女人正在那里等他。她迅速走了进来,他太慢了,没能及时从她身边挤出去。门关上了,电梯开始移动。 “你好,马丁,”她说着,笑了,然后按下了停止按钮。

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Description: This educational OneNote page presents a plot structure diagram, often referred to as Freytag's pyramid, for the short story "The Elevator" by William Sleator. It outlines the story's progression through Exposition, Rising Action, and Climax, with specific plot points detailed for each stage. The diagram also includes a separate text box defining the "Components of Plot" and features two illustrative cartoons related to elevators and a mysterious figure.

🇨🇳 描述: 此OneNote教育页面展示了一个情节结构图,通常被称为弗雷塔格金字塔,用于分析威廉·斯莱特短篇小说《电梯》。它概述了故事通过开端(Exposition)、发展(Rising Action)和高潮(Climax)的进展,并详细列出了每个阶段的具体情节要点。该图还包含一个独立的文本框,定义了“情节构成要素”,并配有两幅与电梯和神秘人物相关的插图漫画。

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"The Elevator" by William Sleator Western Plot Structure "THE ELEVATOR" by William Sleator 3. Climax! On the way back home from the hospital, Martin's father leaves him alone in the elevator. Before the elevator reaches Martin's floor, the large women gets on, greets Martin, and pushes the "Stop" button. Martin... A lady will enter DON'T LOOK at her 2. Rising Action ▪ Martin decides to take the elevator every day. ▪ One day, a large woman gets on the elevator and stares at Martin for the entire elevator ride. ▪ Martin asks his father about the woman. ▪ Martin falls down the stairs, breaking his leg. 4. Falling Action 1. Exposition Martin, a thin 12-year-old boy, lives with his father on the 17ᵗʰ floor of an old building. Martin is afraid of the elevator. Inciting Moment: one day, Martin takes the stairs but his father asks why he's out of breath. COMPONENTS OF PLOT Exposition/Opening: provides the background information needed to understand the story, such as descriptions of the characters, setting, conflict, etc. Ends with the "inciting moment," an incident that sets the rest of the story in motion. Rising Action: introduces various obstacles the main character must overcome, such as complications to the main conflict as well as secondary conflicts. Climax/Turning Point: the moment of greatest suspense; the main character makes a big decision or takes action that determines the outcome of the rest of the story. Falling Action: during the falling action, the conflict surrounding the main character winds down, with the main character either winning or losing. Denouement/Resolution: the main character ends up either better off (comedy) or worse off (tragedy) than at the beginning of the story. Remaining issues or loose ends are resolved. 5. Resolution

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威廉·斯莱特尔的《电梯》 西方情节结构 《电梯》 作者:威廉·斯莱特尔 3. 高潮! 从医院回家的路上,马丁的父亲把他独自留在电梯里。在电梯到达马丁楼层之前,那个高大的女人走了进来,向马丁打招呼,然后按下了“停止”按钮。马丁…… 一个女人会进来 不要看她 2. 情节发展 ▪ 马丁决定每天都乘坐电梯。 ▪ 有一天,一个高大的女人走进电梯,在整个乘梯过程中一直盯着马丁。 ▪ 马丁向父亲询问那个女人。 ▪ 马丁从楼梯上摔下来,摔断了腿。 4. 结局发展 1. 铺垫 马丁,一个瘦弱的12岁男孩,和他的父亲住在一栋旧楼的17层。马丁害怕电梯。 导火线:有一天,马丁走楼梯,但他的父亲问他为什么气喘吁吁。 情节构成要素 铺垫/开端:提供理解故事所需的背景信息,例如人物、背景、冲突等的描述。以“导火线”结束,这是一个引发故事其余部分发展的事件。 情节发展:引入主人公必须克服的各种障碍,例如主要冲突的复杂化以及次要冲突。 高潮/转折点:悬念最大的时刻;主人公做出重大决定或采取行动,决定了故事其余部分的结局。 结局发展:在结局发展阶段,围绕主人公的冲突逐渐平息,主人公或胜或败。 结局/收尾:主人公的结局要么比故事开始时更好(喜剧),要么更糟(悲剧)。剩余的问题或未解之谜得到解决。 5. 结局